Tuesday, 28 February 2012

Five Sentence Fiction: Yearning


We lay, our bodies barely touching, the sheet draped across our stomachs as the pale moon peeked nervously through the curtains. My eyes roved, taking in the contours of his upper body lit by silvery rays. I could almost see his heart beating beneath his skin and I licked my lips. My hand moved slowly, gently, and my fingers lightly stroked the dark, wiry hair covering his chest. My head swam with longing and my body was awake with desire…then…he snored…

5 comments:

  1. FABULOUS!!! I love that in five sentences you manage to make your reader feel excited, tense and very amused!

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  2. I LOVED this! It's sensual and romantic....and the last line was hilarious!!

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  3. Awesome :) I was completely entranced and then that last sentnece had me literally laughing out loud.

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  4. Thank you so much for your lovely comments!

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