Tuesday, 21 February 2012

Five Sentence Fiction: Exquisite

The word: Exquisite

“Just one more…that’s it!” she said, “One more!”
I shook my head, beads of sweat ran down my face and I thought I was finished, but I pushed again, just once more.  The delight on my husband’s face was all I needed. He glanced at the midwife, who nodded, and our child was delivered into his waiting hands. Once the cord was cut, and her delicious cry voiced, I watched as my daughter stared into her father’s eyes and my own welled with exquisite, unshed tears.

(When I was born, back in 1971, there was a nurses strike and only one midwife on duty when Mum went into labour. Dad became a midwife that day and I was delivered straight into his hands...I know 'exquisite' is a word he'd have used!)

Photograph of Lisa Shambrook by Peter Roberts


  1. Thank you both for your lovely comments! :)

  2. This is great! I loved the backstory, too...what an awesome thing :)

    1. Thank you Lillie, I'm loving 5SF...really helps my creativity and I love reading everyone else's takes on the chosen word!