Wednesday, 29 August 2012

Five Sentence Fiction: Blush

Photograph by Bekah and Lisa Shambrook (please do not use without permission)

Pete was half way up the steps with his motorbike helmet tucked under his arm. He glanced back and waited for Jen. Jen struggled with the chinstrap on her helmet and he moved back to her and unfastened it. Jen lifted the helmet off and self-consciously touched her hair. Pete leaned close and whispered in her ear, Jen blushed and Pete grinned.

6 comments:

  1. A blushing biker, an unexpected image you've conjured up!

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  2. That's the way it goes! Nice one.

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  3. Aww, so sweet and tender! Love it!

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  4. I love the picture you included with this. Makes me think he whispered something especially sweet to her. :)

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  5. I love the atmosphere you've created, the warmth and intimacy between the two...

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  6. "Jen blushed and Pete grinned." Says it all. Nice.

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