Wednesday, 19 December 2012

55 Words #39: The Omen


Every eye watched her, and he knew she knew it.
Nerves jangled as he eyed the ring, surreptitiously slipped around the tip of the cue.
She wriggled her backside, grabbed the cue and aimed. She never noticed the sparkler spin off and fly across the room as she took the shot that broke his heart.

(55 Words)

Written for 55 Word Challenge. Choose a picture and write a story in no more than 55 words... see here for other great entries!

PS. Here's a link to my 13-year-old's go at this week's 55 Words: Secret Hero.

2 comments:

  1. This was just amazing, loved it loads. So much emotion packed in so few words :)

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  2. Oh, poor guy!! You broke my heart in fifty-five words!!

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