I get that sweaty palm feeling when I read this. Very evocative, Lisa. We don't know why he did it, but we knew he had a madness he had to share. Terrifying. Beautifully written.
Absolutely beautiful formatting and powerful storytelling. You've captured his pain so well that we feel empathy for him. Really wonderful, Lisa!! :D
Lisa,really good job on this. Difficult to journey with someone about to commit such a horrendous deed yet fascinating to wonder what thoughts would be running through his/her head. You've paced it really well too. Excellent!
A powerful story.So much packed into such a small space.Great build up of tension as he moves slowly but surely to hitting that button.