Saturday, 8 December 2012

BCF: Tail Lights

This is written for Business Card Fiction's First Prompt: December:



Getting the hang of this now, and I like the PSD template. This one was in High Tower Font size 16.


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4 comments:

  1. I get that sweaty palm feeling when I read this. Very evocative, Lisa. We don't know why he did it, but we knew he had a madness he had to share. Terrifying. Beautifully written.

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  2. Absolutely beautiful formatting and powerful storytelling. You've captured his pain so well that we feel empathy for him. Really wonderful, Lisa!! :D

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  3. Lisa,really good job on this. Difficult to journey with someone about to commit such a horrendous deed yet fascinating to wonder what thoughts would be running through his/her head. You've paced it really well too. Excellent!

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  4. A powerful story.
    So much packed into such a small space.
    Great build up of tension as he moves slowly but surely to hitting that button.

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