Thursday, 3 January 2013

12 Days of Christmas: Spirit

A tale of possession awaits Day Ten of 12 Days of Christmas:


Spirit
She didn’t know what thrust her towards the cemetery, an unusual shortcut home, but she saw him kneeling at the grave, unaware, as she hurried through the church gates. Unwilling to disturb him, she walked quickly down the York flagstone path. As she passed the grave she shivered and her face tingled in the cold chill of winter’s evening. At home, she barely glanced in the mirror before settling for the night with a hot chocolate and book, so her green eyes turned blue, was a surprise the next morning.

It was a perverse desire to see the grieving man again that took her through the graveyard another night, but he was gone and the chill that surged through her was one of guilty disappointment.
Two more nights, and the shortcut became an obsession, but he was never there. 
Cold nights played havoc with her hair, curls loosened and her locks darkened almost as black as the raven watching on a nearby tomb.

The cemetery became familiar and the grieving man a memory until two weeks later when she bumped into him, dropping her bag, as he wandered down the cobbled path. He raised his head, stepped aside and paused as their eyes met. His eyes lit up his tearstained face as he stared at her, and his hand reached out to touch her arm and shivers twisted down her spine. 

His apology coffee became a meal and two weeks later she crossed his threshold. She shivered and glanced in the mirror by the door; she’d lost weight and grown taller. Then she noticed the portrait, ebony hair and blue eyes, and she suddenly knew why he adored her. He watched as the silent raven landed on her shoulder, shivered possessively and vanished…and his love was finally home. 

(298 Words)
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6 comments:

  1. Wow, chillingly creepy and yet so lovely. This is wonderful, Lisa.

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  2. Very Edgar Allen Poe - I wasn't expecting that. Excellent

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  3. This was a bit of a creepy one from you, loved it, agree with Cameron very Poe like, great job,

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  4. Ooh, a very spooky tale, beautifully written. A clever and creepy take on Spirit. xx

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  5. Beautifully done, Lisa--the slow build of broody atmosphere, the depiction of setting, the sense of foreboding--and what a perfect touch the raven is. Plus, your writing is, as usual, simply delicious.

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  6. I don't know what to say about this one. It was creepy and luscious, real and fantastical. A total surprise in tone and character...also, love your imagery.

    I also agree with Kern: your writing is, as usual, simply delicious :))

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