Wednesday, 2 January 2013

12 Days of Christmas: Stories

Day Nine of 12 Days of Christmas ...and it's: Stories, we all love stories!

Photograph by Lisa Shambrook (please do not use without permission)

Stories
“Could you stay behind please Cara.” Cara sat back down at her desk and spent the next few minutes pulling fluff bobbles from her school jumper. 
“I wish you’d foster that kind of attention on your school work, rather than your uniform Miss Langston.” Cara jumped as Mr Lewis approached. “It’s been noted you’re withdrawn, that maybe, you’re not happy...that maybe…”
There was a knock at the door and his face relaxed. Mrs Taylor walked in. “Sorry I’m late, bit of a rush!”
They both regarded Cara with such seriousness she wanted to laugh.
Mrs Taylor spoke softly. “Cara, we’ve had some concerns and just wanted to be sure you’re okay?” Cara’s shoulders relaxed, maybe they were about to address the bullying. Mrs Taylor continued. “It’s obvious you haven’t been happy this term…” 
Only this term, thought Cara, they haven’t watched me that closely then!
“If we can help…” Mr Lewis flicked through her English exercise book.
“Is this because of my story?”  Cara stared straight at her English tutor. Mr Lewis cast a sideways glance at Mrs Taylor.
“It is isn’t it? It’s fiction you know! All made up!”
“Of course it is!” Mrs Taylor smiled, “Just that if it wasn’t…”
“It is.” Cara rubbed her forehead, “I have an overactive imagination.”
“It’s very lifelike, very real…”
“But it’s not,” insisted Cara.
“But you understand why we’re concerned?”
Cara flushed. “They’re just stories, things I make up and write down…”
Is there anything you’d like to tell us? We’ll always be here.”
Cara shook her head and after a moment Mr Lewis dismissed her.
The school was so intuitive…fiction had raised alarms, whilst her reclusive state at the hands of bullies was missed. Cara didn’t trust the school to put a plaster on her finger, even less a psychiatric overhaul!

(301 Words)
Day Nine: September - Stories
And there are more great stories to read...

6 comments:

  1. So sad. Poor Cara. And like all children, when we fail them, they retreat. Your characters always are so real, Lisa, like I know them. So well-written and as always lyrical prose.

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  2. That was from the heart, darling, I know. It touched mine xxx

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  3. You've got a real gift for capturing YA voice and psychology - that distrust of authority and cynicism combined with hope and longing for someone to put it all right. Excellent as always. Loving Beneath the Rainbow!

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  4. Echoing what has been said before, you have such a gift with the way your words bring your characters to life, lovely job :)

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  5. Thank you, and Cam, you're right!

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  6. If only this were a purely fictional situation. You've captured Cara's disillusionment and hidden despair perfectly. And now off I go to kick something on Cara's behalf.

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