Friday, 1 March 2013

Flash! Friday: Casting Pearls


Eloise disliked the constraints of the time she found herself in, almost as much as the heavy, corseted skirts and laced-up boots she’d been bound into, and when the opportunity had arisen to rid herself of these constrictions she took it. She slipped out of her skirt with the same ease she slipped the knife into his chest.
The look of incredulity upon his cruel, angular features had been worth every last minute that she remained staring into his dying face.  
She wiped the blade’s crimson stain on her discarded skirt and slipped the knife into her belt, before fingering the sumptuous strings of black pearls at her neck, the only possession that truly belonged to her.
She was out on the pier in a matter of moments. The moon’s rays danced like teardrops on the black ocean as she jumped. A siren rang out up at the house, its warning piercing the silent night air, and she knew his guards had rallied. Her underskirt clung to her legs as she sank into the murky depths. Behind her bubbles effervesced through the gloom, but even his aquatic guards held no fear, not this time.
She flung her head back, brought her hand to the heavy necklace and tore it away from her neck. She threaded pearls through her fingers until she found the right one, and then she squeezed.
One flash and the ocean glittered, and she swam like an eel through the portal, hoping to emerge in a slightly more equitable time…

(253 Words)

Written for Flash! Friday #13
Write a 200-300 word story based on the prompt picture.

3 comments:

  1. This was one brilliant piece of writing ... loved your words - "She slipped out of her skirt with the same ease she slipped the knife into his chest." Amazing literary piece !!!

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  2. Really loved it! The line that Green Speck quoted I was also going to mention - really worked for me too, loved it!

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  3. Oh, wow! This might be my favorite piece of flash fiction by you!! Love, love love this! Especially the line "the sumptuous strings of black pearls at her neck, the only possession that truly belonged to her."

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