Monday, 9 September 2013

Monday Mixer: Scent

Scent

As she ran all she could hear was the susurrus of the murmuring leaves as they swirled about her, and she quickened her pace. She slowed stepping carefully through winding vines and convolvulus, still decorated with scattered diamonds of dew.  She paused, one foot still aloft, and flared her nostrils. Heavy petrichor rose from the forest floor masking the scent she tracked.  Her foot dropped and she stood silent, listening.
The breeze still whispered, and her mind whirled as scents mingled. Flora’s fragrance intermingled with fungi and soil’s pungent aroma, and different odours emanated from the undergrowth, confusing her and sending her into a tailspin.
She raised her nose, but the scent had vanished.
Just mere months since Christmas and here she was lost and abandoned. Her meretricious collar, now studded with dull zircona, had long since snapped…and she settled in the leaf mulch with a maudlin whine, to wait.

(150 Words)

Photograph by Lisa Shambrook (Please do not use without permission)


Written for Monday Mixer over at Jeff's Latinum Vault. A challenge which requires only 150 words and the use of three or more word prompts. As this has five prompts, it fits for Overachiever, if so desired. Go and read all the other 150 word tales! 


6 comments:

  1. :-((( I am dwelling too much on this now. . . .

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    1. I know, I did warn I might break your heart... can't believe people can do this. Pups are so loyal, trusting and forgiving...

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  2. Some difficult words but used so seamlessly, nice work :)

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  3. A lilting, wistful tale with a real emotional punch. Good stuff Lisa!

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  4. Poor thing! You can feel her anxiety in the flow of words.

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